Vol.2, No.1 • July, 2008

The Poetry Of Terry McDermott

Blue Tornado Boy Meets Derek the Red

Seahorses in the Clouds

Bouncing Blue Eyes

 

FROM THE ADVENTURES OF THE HUMAN CARDINAL

In our last episode, "Live From the Aquarium," Blue Tornado Boy defeated the tie-dyed hippie wrestler Kent Cool for the golden belt. Yet he didn't celebrate very long. The giant Viking Derek the Red entered The Aquarium, at Seahorse City, and demanded a challenge.

What will the Blue Wonder do?

Read on and find out.

Blue Tornado Boy Meets Derek the Red
(This was done in poetic form called Fibonacci.)

Derek
The Red
Entered The Aquarium
Blue Tornado Boy trembled with fear
As the giant evil Viking waved his pitchfork
Yet our blue hero knew he could not runaway from this deadly challenge

The
Bell rang
Blue Wonder's speed
Could not withstand Derek's strength
In mere seconds the bell was ringing again
Now the seven-foot Viking with long red hair was the Universal Champion

Quickly
He grabbed
The golden belt
Fleeing upon his black stallion
The audience at The Aquarium were beyond excitement
Blue Tornado Boy had been beaten yet he did not run in fear

Next month we will return to Brooke Meadow Lane with the Human Cardinal and the rest of the gang. From Seahorse City Derek the Red went to a place called Tulip Town and his life was changed. You can find those adventures in previous issues.

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Seahorses in the Clouds

Seahorses

Flew from the ocean

And dwelt

Among the

Clouds above a great city

Known for enchantment

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Bouncing Blue Eyes

Bouncing
Blue eyes
On the highway

Frozen
By this
Strange majestic site

Moving
Closer in
A form shapes

A
Black cat
With blue eyes

Travels
The roads
During the moonlight

Funny
How mysteries
Can be solved

 

I just discovered this form of poetry, each verse is three lines based on one, two, three word count, and no line limit. This form is called Janaku, created by Eileen Tobias.

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Terry McDermott lives in Crossett Arkansas and works in a laboratory for Georgia Pacific Paper. He is the author of "Tales of the Carnivorous Duck: A Collection of Stories and Poems." These days his main focus is working on "The Adventures of the Human Cardinal," a story of a superhero told in various poetic forms. His motivation for writing these stories is to show kids that poetry can be fun. You can read more of Terry's writing on his blog The Shamgar Report where he has been writing since 2005

Also visit Terry's internet home. or at http://shamgarreport.blogspot.com/