Vol.1, No.10 • April, 2008

The Poetry Of Terry McDermott

Tribute to Coleridge

One Tulip Stone

The Human Cardinal

Benny the Bat

Uncle Pluto's Orange Soda

 

My Tribute to Coleridge and the Ancient Mariner

From the ship he shot the great albatross,
His purpose for this we will never know.
But his mistake his shipmate's life lost,
Yet he was cursed to journey to and fro.

Telling of the strange tragedy at sea,
Miles from his home in land of crystal ice.
A sin committed his life never free,
He transformed to become wise and nice.

This epic they say if full of symbol,
Like when Adam ate from the sinner's tree.
When we think of our sins we should tremble,
Yet we can be spared by the savior's creed.

The old mariner journeyed on a great quest,
And touched the heart of a wedding guest.

This sonnet is a tribute to Samuel Coleridge, the poet who wrote
"Rhime of the Ancient Mariner." My favorite poem.
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The Adventures of Derek the Red


One Tulip Stone

The Black Stallion
Along
With his shiny sword
And
The helmet with the horns
Was the payment required to own a tulip stone
Derek smiled
He was now a happy man
Walking away from the village
One red tulip
Filled his once empty heart
Villagers watched as Derek reached into the tulip
Taking the shiny stone he never turned his back
The only thing in life Derek ever wished for
One tulip stone

This concludes the Derek the Red Series.

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The Adventures of the Human Cardinal

The Human Cardinal

Human Cardinal
Spreading out his bright red wings
Defending pure peace

Hero of us all
Fighting those evil creatures
From deep outer space

Blue Tornado Boy
His faithful sidekick nephew
Speeding at his side

Champion of Earth
Coming out of the future
Human Cardinal

This is a form know as Senryu, which is a Haiku without the mention of seasons.

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Benny the Bat

Benny the Bat
Within the deep dark galaxy
A green lights appears
He is the tiny watchman
Benny the Bat

When danger is spotted
He tells Human Cardinal
Who always plays chess
With Blue Tornado Boy

Never part of the action
But full of wisecracks
That the others ignore
In truth he is wise

Human Cardinal boasts
Blue Tornado Boy nods away
Benny will roll his eyes
Saying Oh! Brother!

Often comical
But his job is not
The little bright light
Benny the Bat.

This was done in the naani form.

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Uncle Pluto's Orange Soda

The drink of the galaxy
Made with fruits
From many worlds
Superheroes just love it

Here are just a few
Human Cardinal
Blue Tornado Boy
And Benny the Bat

Fly to any space station
And tell the clerk
You want the great taste of
Uncle Pluto's Orange Soda

Also done in the naani form.

 

Author's Note: My last three poems introduce the cast of a series of poems "The Adventures of the Human Cardinal." I call it comic strip poetry, in an attempt to show children that poetry can be fun. Some readers may remember Benny the Bat from the Icy the Bat poems.

Now you know some of the cast and their favorite drink. Their Adventures are coming next month.

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Terry McDermott lives in Crossett Arkansas and works in a laboratory for Georgia Pacific Paper. He is the author of "Tales of the Carnivorous Duck: A Collection of Stories and Poems." These days his main focus is working on "The Adventures of the Human Cardinal," a story of a superhero told in various poetic forms. His motivation for writing these stories is to show kids that poetry can be fun. You can read more of Terry's writing on his blog The Shamgar Report where he has been writing since 2005

Also visit Terry's internet home. or at http://shamgarreport.blogspot.com/

For more from Terry visit his other poetry: February, January, December, November, and October.